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TASK 2
Fresh air is very important for survival of life on the Earth. Especially keeping the air quality in city centres at healthy levels is current issue. It is generally known that this is primarly because of industrial factories and transport in cities. And of course heating and coal power plants (which there are) close to the cities.
Hi, Martina, this intro is excellent. Just watch out for the last sentece – it is a fragment and that is something that should NOT be in an essay. Connect it to the sentence before and remove the brackets (which there are) and substitute it with “located”
It is generally known that this is primarly because of industrial factories and transport in cities and of course heating and coal power plants located close to the cities.
Soňo, thank you. Now, is it right?
Yes, that is almost correct, Martina, just one more thing: fix the spelling of “primarily” (I overlooked that before).
TASK 1:
Education is very important for our future. Although every parent wants the best for his child, sometimes it is not possible. There are a lot of problems in families, that can change plans about child education – physical and mental health, death, divorce, loss of job.
It is very well written, Lucie. Ypu have great way to express yourself and put words together. However, you seem to be writing only about the first point, i.e. family problems. Keep the first sentence and try again and keep the rest for the second paragraph (1st paragraph of the body of the essay) –
Task 1 – intro
Education belongs into to the most disscused topics over the years. Recently, there has been a increasing number of students without higher education. Lots of disscusions have been lead about topics such as finacinal difficutiels of students or how to help them.
Task 2 – intro
Bad air quality and polution in citys has costed their residents a good quality life. Automobiles alongside factories have been marked as the biggest problems in the disscusions of air quality.
Task 3 – intro
Learning of foreing launguages is included in the education of all develope countries. Nowdays the topic of employment, learning about new cultures and how to awake an intrest in the students has sprung it´s ways into the disscusion.
Task 1 – intro
Education belongs AMONG to the most discussed topics over the years. Recently, there has been a increasing number of students without higher education. THERE HAS BEEN PLENTY OF DISCUSSION about topics such as financial difficulties of students or how to help them.
This intro is very good , although you might want to mention all 3 points: financial difficulties, family problems, your own idea
Task 2 – intro
Bad air quality and pollution in cities has cost their residents a good quality life. VEHICLES alongside factories have been marked as the biggest problems in the discuions of air quality.
Again, fair attempt, and again add one more point.
Task 3 – intro
Learning of foreign languages is included in the education of all developed countries. Nowadays the topic of employment, learning about new cultures and how to awake students INTERESTED has sprung its ways into the discusison.
This one is great!
Overall great job, Zorka, but watch out your spelling and try to remember the capitalised phrases.
TASK 1:
A good education system is very important sign of well developed countries. If young people leave the education system prematurely, it can bring serious problems to the economy in the future. There are plenty of reasons why to young people should continue in the their education.
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Good enviromental conditions and especially air quality are a problem of most of developed cities. The sourses of polution are mainly industry and traffic in the cities. New and more enviroment-friendly technologies could help to solve this problem.
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Learning of foreign languages is a standard part of all education systems. You can read a lot of articles that an artificial inteligence will be used for communication in foreign languages very soon. But there are plenty of reasons, why knowledge of foreign languages will be still very important skill and not only in professional life.
Learning a foreign language helps students develop a set of important skills. Why should foreign languages be taught in schools?
Wow, Bohumil, you write like a pro! Great job!! Keep it up!
1. The biggest problem all around the world is lack of education. Does exist a tool which could help people to achieve an appropriate education? Is that possible in developing countries as well as in the rest of the world?
2. An air pollution is a huge problem concern for many big cities all around the world. Politics show us their goodwill and hard work, but money wins. A solution of this problem is a tough and demanding task and it is not only reduced on develop countries, but every governments has to cooperate on it.
3. Nowadays the world is connected at all. If we would like to see a positive impact, we had to clearly and understandably communicate to each other. The easiest way is start at school age and learn at least English plus other foreingner language.
1. The biggest problem all around the world is lack of education. IS THERE a tool which could help people to achieve appropriate education? Is that possible in developing countries as well as in the rest of the world?
If this is the topic, Kamča, then you did not really start answering the task. TEENAGERS are DROPPING OUT OF SCHOOL to find a JOB. How can we help them to CONTINUE their education?
2. THE air pollution is a huge problem concernING many big cities all around the world. PoliticIANS show us their goodwill and hard work, but money wins.THE solution TO this problem is a tough and demanding task and it is not only reduced on developING countries, but every government has to cooperate on it.
This intro is a good esay intro but make sure you stay on the topic:
Keeping the air quality in city centres at healthy levels for their residents is a concern for many places. How can we solve the problem of pollution in city centres?
Write about:
automobiles
factories
……………… (your own idea)
3. Nowadays the world is connected THOUROUGHLY/COMPLETELY (At all means vůbec ne). If we would like to see a positive impact, we had to clearly and understandably communicate to each other. The easiest way is start at school age and learn at least English plus ANother FOREIGN language.
This looks more like the end of the essay because you have already decided on what is correct. But it might pass. However, make sure you stay on the topic and address all the points.
Learning a foreign language helps students develop a set of important skills. Why should foreign languages be taught in schools?
Notes
Write about:
new cultures
employment
…………. (your own idea)
Task 3 – intro
Education for everyone belongs to the most important adventages in the developed countries. Except Math, Physics and others are usually taught foreign languages. There are many reasons why knowledge of foreign language can help us in our life.
Good intro, Evi – from general to particular.
Task 2 – intro
Many developed countries try to get better the quality of their enviroment during last decades.
Air pollution especially in city centres is a problem which concerns not only residents. There are some ways how the air quality in the cities could be improved.
Fantastic intro.
Just the first sentence is a little muddled. It should be:
Many developed countries have been trying to improve the quality of their environment for the last decades.
Task 1 – intro
Education belongs among the most important interests in developed countries. In spite of this fact many young people drop out of school to find a job and earn money. There are many causes which could result in premature leaving of education system.
Fantastic!!